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Beauty is not just skin deep,
It thrives in a person's soul,
The benefit of surface beauty some do reap,
But the beauty within is what makes one whole,
If one is vain the world will see,
But the kind and meek none do seek,
Fame and money they say is the worlds true key,
But love and true happiness, akin to the meek.
Vanity.
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NocturneJewel Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2010
This is so beautiful and it's message so true. The rhymes are perfect too.
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2010  Student Writer
Thank you!
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JasonSage Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Nice poem. I liked the variety on the rhyme, and the rhythm was well done. Excellent execution of the theme!
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2010  Student Writer
Thank you so very much!! :) <3
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JasonSage Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Very welcome!
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2010  Student Writer
^^ <3
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NoYouHaha Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010
such beatiful poetry
you deserve an epic geek hug!
*Insert new epic geek hug emoticon here* X3
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010  Student Writer
LOL! Thanks!
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NoYouHaha Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010
nicely done
I'm currently mind blank right now... but this is so beautiful
keep up the good work!
Hope you become famous one day!
if not the geeks are always by your side!
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FireChic86 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010  Student Writer
LOL! Thank you!
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